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For: yura_slash | Title: Mastering the Art of Misconception | Rating: NC–17

For: [info]yura_slash
From: [info]sparkysparky
Title: Mastering the Art of Misconception
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Yura asked for something involving a one-off shag, a confused!Ron and mpreg. I hope this managed to get all of that plus porn into a fic.
Disclaimer: Characters/universe are not mine. Everyone one involved is over 18.
Warnings: MPreg, some angst, rimming
Author's Note: Thanks to you know who for beta and cheerleading! Couldn't have done it without you both!

Mastering the Art of Misconception (Friends Locked)

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[info]sev1970

December 19 2007, 04:04:50 UTC 4 years ago

Oh how I loved this: the way that it began so ordinarily with the three of them going out (having Ginny dress both Harry and Ron was great!); Harry's struggle with Ron's appearance; the fight between Ron and Hermione; the confession, even with Harry being drunk; the very hot sex; when Harry found out he was pregnant -- that was so sad, knowing he and Ron weren't together. I think my favorite part of the entire fic was when Harry cried when he noticed his broken china in the kitchen -- so perfect for a pregnant Harry! Then the sex part II was oh so very very good -- the rimming...guh!

[info]sparkysparky

December 27 2007, 15:24:03 UTC 4 years ago

Thank you so much! Ginny got a kick out of playing dress up with her brother and ex-boyfriend. She might have tortured them just a little, and just because she loves him! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

[info]rickey_a

December 19 2007, 04:47:07 UTC 4 years ago

oh my, poor Harry, so self-doubting and second guessing and up the duff
and very classic Harry and Ron that they manage not to talkd for six months and Ron doesn't notice what's up with Harry
so glad you set everything right

[info]sparkysparky

December 27 2007, 15:24:58 UTC 4 years ago

I know! Why do we always write Harry so self-doubtful? *cuddles him* But I guess that's alright as long as he has Ron to set him straight (or...not) in the end! Thanks for commenting!

[info]simons_flower

December 19 2007, 06:58:28 UTC 4 years ago

Hee! Poor Harry, having his pregnancy hormones show themselves over broken china (which I totally understand). Hell, poor Harry for finding out wizards can get pregnant :)

Lovely fic.

[info]sparkysparky

December 27 2007, 15:25:37 UTC 4 years ago Edited:  December 27 2007, 15:25:49 UTC

Mrs. Weasley gave him that china, and it was his first housewarming present. So to see it broken just sort of broke him.

Thanks for commenting!

[info]yura_slash

December 19 2007, 15:46:42 UTC 4 years ago Edited:  December 19 2007, 15:47:37 UTC

thank you so much, mystery author! i love so much how you write harry in this. the sex was VERY hot, which is important of course, but harry... his thoughts after waking up the morning after, and then the way he's just crushed.

i also really like this part:

He sent an interdepartmental message to the hospital asking for an immediate appointment. The confirmation came back quickly, and Harry dragged himself off to St. Mungos, dreading every minute of the appointment.

it may sound weird, but it's the little details like this that make me smile. like, hm, this could definitely be how they handle it when an auror isn't feeling well and has to request a doctor's appointment. *smiles*

also, i like that abortion was never brought up as an option. while i totally support a woman's right to choose, i've always thought that things would be very different in the Wizarding world, which is antiquated and where magical children are striven for and thought precious.

Oh! and this:
It was Ron's baby inside him, and they were barely speaking. There was no way Harry could tell him about this, not until Ron figured out what he wanted. And even then, if Harry wasn't what Ron wanted, he'd have to think of something to tell him.

i can definitely see Harry not wanting to pressure Ron, even though he's pregnant with his baby :(

and before this gets completely ridiculous and i end up quoting the entire last half, i LOVE the entire last half. the way that Harry reacts when the doctor tells him that the first three months are the hardest part, and the way he bursts into tears over his dishes, and the way Ron doesn't realize that he said pregnant until after they've kissed and made up. Oh! and that Ron was just trying to make Harry jealous- that's just so typical of Ron.

AND stretch mark love! yes!

thank you thank you thank you again, mystery author!!!

Anonymous

December 19 2007, 16:10:20 UTC 4 years ago

YAY! I'm so glad you liked this! I had a lot of fun writing it, and erm...it got away from me. I have plans to MAKE IT LONGER but after the reveal. :-D So glad you liked it!!!

[info]yura_slash

4 years ago

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[info]sparkysparky

4 years ago

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[info]maple_mahogany

December 20 2007, 18:47:21 UTC 4 years ago Edited:  December 20 2007, 18:48:16 UTC

I really enjoyed drunk!talking!Harry. He was adorable. I was so excited to see them just getting right to it, no big long angst and confusion and stalling - nope they just did it.

Take what you want, Ron. You can do anything to me and I'll love it.

Mmm, sexy! and then Ron did take what he wanted! yay!

Of course, the angst came later.

I tell ya, I've never giggled my way through an MPREG fic before - actually enjoying it, kind of giggle.

Very cute!

[info]sparkysparky

December 27 2007, 15:27:20 UTC 4 years ago

Take what you want, Ron. You can do anything to me and I'll love it.

Mmm, sexy! and then Ron did take what he wanted! yay!

That's my personal favorite part of this fic. I love when Ron takes what he wants, and when Harry gives him permission too. It's SO HOT!

I'm so glad the fic made you laugh, and that you enjoyed it! I was a bit leery of writing MPreg, as it can be done so badly, so I'm really glad people liked it.

[info]shes_gone

December 20 2007, 22:42:00 UTC 4 years ago

Aw, I liked this! I tend not to do the mpreg thing, but your Harry's so cute, it didn't turn me off to the fic at all. :)

And, oh, that was some hot sex.

Well done!

[info]sparkysparky

December 27 2007, 15:28:04 UTC 4 years ago

I'm so glad you liked it, even if you don't normally like mpreg. And I'm glad you liked the sex! Thanks!

[info]aunt_agatha

December 22 2007, 15:15:17 UTC 4 years ago

Ron is an idiot. What did he think Harry would think about that letter?

Ah well, at least the idiot loves him and is great in the sack. :D

mpreg... meep! But I must say, it makes me wonder what a guy's abdomen would look like if it had those silvery threads on it. *looks at her belly* And hormonal Harry was sad and funny at the same time. Poor thing!

[info]sparkysparky

December 27 2007, 15:29:00 UTC 4 years ago

Yes, but Ron's a loving idiot. He thought that Harry would understand the need to take some time to think about the fact that they'd just had sex. He didn't realize Harry would see it as rejection.

Stretch marks from babies are sexy on anyone. :-D

[info]aunt_agatha

4 years ago

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[info]chiralove

December 23 2007, 04:21:59 UTC 4 years ago

mmm, I love the way they sort all their misunderstandings out and come together for a happy (and hot) ending! Fabulous!

[info]sparkysparky

December 27 2007, 15:29:31 UTC 4 years ago

Of course they do! They're HarrynRon. They'll always come back together in the end! Thanks for commenting!

[info]aniwde

December 24 2007, 06:10:24 UTC 4 years ago

Classic Harry/Ron - the misunderstandings and confusion of feelings that are finally resolved. The mpreg added something a little different, though! Nicely done :D

[info]sparkysparky

December 27 2007, 15:30:07 UTC 4 years ago

Thanks for commenting! I think misunderstandings and confusion will always be a part of a Harry/Ron relationship. It wouldn't be the same without it!

[info]tariana

January 27 2008, 02:40:51 UTC 4 years ago

Wow, not sure how I missed commenting on this one when I read it before, but I wanted to remedy that.

VERY nice. There isn't very much Harry/Ron mpreg, and it's something I enjoy. Yours is very nicely done -- clueless Ron and all!

[info]countdownish

February 25 2008, 12:03:39 UTC 4 years ago

Hi, I was recommended this story to read, but your journal is friends locked, is there any place you've posted this story so I would be able to read it?

[info]chocofrogchic

August 1 2008, 13:17:21 UTC 3 years ago

Me too! I was recommended this story to read and the story is friends locked. i've add you as friends and hopefully you would accept that, or is there any place you've posted this story?

[info]violetdrop

September 4 2008, 03:34:46 UTC 3 years ago

Great story, I enjoyed reading it. Loved your Harry and Ron in this.

[info]cinthya_malfoy

April 23 2009, 04:15:05 UTC 3 years ago

I'd like to read your fic, but it's locked... How can I read it?

[info]deathjunke

June 16 2009, 15:37:26 UTC 2 years ago

can you please friend me so that i can read the fic?

[info]cilghal

September 27 2009, 01:43:19 UTC 2 years ago

Hey I'd like to read this, but it's friends locked.

[info]uchihagirl5

May 7 2010, 00:39:27 UTC 2 years ago

OMG I have herad so much about this story that makes me wnat to read it, bust sadly link is broken. You think you can send me a link or the story tiself? I really really wnat to read it (I am a sucker for ron/harry mpreg) u would make my day, thx!
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